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Writing Effective Sales Copy

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This entry was posted on 9/19/2007 3:21 PM and is filed under Selling Strategies,Direct Mail,Email,Psychology.

Email seems cheap and easy. Yet after some brief flirtations, bank marketers are once again favoring direct mail thanks to this media's ability to be highly personal, reliable and measurable.  E-mail can be extremely effective.  But direct mail remains the best way to reach the most targeted list.

Sales letters are the most customized form of direct-mail marketing.  Ideally, copy should be as personal as possible.  "One-to-one communication should not be a myth," says Bob Singer of Financial Marketing Systems, "but rather a goal."  Individualized direct mail is possible if your copy and mail list is based upon collected customer information, analysis and targeting. 

Brochures, fliers, and photographs on letters, however attractive and expensive, tend to be impersonal and often identify your correspondence as "junk mail."  By contrast, sales letters should address the customer by name and need. You're one step ahead.

The idea is to offer solutions that speak directly to your customer's problems and challenges, whether that's saving time or money, or simply avoiding a hassle.

To help you prepare the "write" sales copy for your letter, here are 10 tips from a cross-section of sales experts, coaches and trainers.  The first two points apply specifically to prospects or customers with a very loose association to your organization:

1. Build trust. Besides the benefit billed at the letter's opening, you can bolster interest and inject pizazz by adding high-profile endorsements from associates or former clients. "I put a testimonial quote from a marquee name at the top of my letter," says Anne Miller, a New York City sales trainer who leverages compliments from such clients as Salomon Smith Barney, Estée Lauder and The New York Times.

2. Get to bona fides, quick. "You need to establish credibility and be believable by the second paragraph," says sales coach Daryl Logullo at Strategic Impact in Vero Beach, Fla. This is where you explain who you are, why you're so cool (or smart or cheap or special or useful) and what you have to offer. How you package that information, of course, varies with your targets and your products.

Some options:

• Case study
• Customer success story
• Key benefits of your product
• Define a problem and to solved it

For cross sales to existing customers, focus on these points:

3. Build relationships. Similarly, don't get caught up in pushing services or products. You want to develop a long-term relationship with the customer, not pressure him into one discounted sale. Use your letter to investigate whether you can solve customer problems or meet needs. Try to build a relationship that will last into the future, and both your company and customer will benefit.

4. Stay in touch.  No relationship, whether business or personal, can be sustained if you only have contact only once, or only in a very great while. 

According to Mark Rodrigues, president of the database marketing company, The Biltmore Group, "Relationships depend upon three factors.  First, somebody has to initiate contact (that's the letter you write). Second, talk about something of mutual interest (that's a relevant product recommendation based upon your analysis and targeting). And, third, stay in touch fairly frequently." 

Rodrigues adds, "Even if the customer doesn't respond immediately, eventually they will have a need you can fulfill.  When that need occurs, the customer will turn to the company that is asking for their business.  In this competitive environment, you've got almost no shot if you're not reaching out and building a relationship.

5. Emphasize reading ease. "Make it easy to navigate so your reader reaches for it first-ahead of the competition's," says Deborah Dumaine, author of Write to the Top: Writing for Corporate Success.

6. Make it memorable. One of the advantages of a sales letter is that prospects can tuck it away for later action. "Great mailers have staying power-sometimes they will end up on a refrigerator door or a bulletin board for years," says Wilson Zehr, chief executive of LaunchPoint, a Portland, Ore., direct-mail provider. He suggests you include reasons for your customers to spend more time with the letter and therefore more time considering your offer. For example, a computer repair service might include the top 10 tips for PC maintenance.

7. Include a call to action. "Inform the reader about what he or she should do next," says Joe Hage at MRA, a branding agency in Syracuse, N.Y. "An example is: 'Please call me on my cell phone (917-555-0000) before Friday, the 28th.'" Or, say you'll follow up with a phone call or more material. Then, of course, make sure you do.

8. If you need an immediate response to a specific product offer, include an incentive. Always explain when, why and how customers should act, says Patti Abbate of Sunrise Public Relations in Needham, Mass. "Then, include an incentive for acting sooner, such as a discount, special offer or something free."

9. Resist "Bulk Mail Letters." The best sales letters, especially when dealing with your own current list, are quite individualized," says Shel Horowitz, author of Principled Profit: Marketing That Puts People First.  Tap your database for information about a customer's sales history and preferences. Then send specialized letters whenever it's appropriate. "If you notice it's been six months since a customer has been in, it might be time for a friendly 'We miss you' letter with an offer specific to that customer," suggests Horowitz.

10. Hit the right notes. "Your letter should sound personal and friendly," says Cathy Rodrigues, a personal coach from Lincolnshire, IL (www.cathyrodrigues.com).  Match your letter copy to the way you want to be perceived.  Cathy is a frequent contributor to the All But Dissertation Survival Guide.

 

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